Needs to be shortened by about 30seconds...
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narrative. Show all posts
Monday, July 11, 2011
Wednesday, March 16, 2011
Narrative Improvements
I presented my narrative today and got some awesome feedback!
Luke suggested making the camera angle long in two different shots to futher enhance the mood I was trying to make. Thank you!
:D
Still a long way to go, but feels good to have an idea of where I'm going.
Have decided to deffinately go with my proposed story 'twist' at the end - but don't feel like revealing it until the story flows a bit better.
Title Ideas:
* Voodoo Cupid.
* Smoke and Mirrors
Luke suggested making the camera angle long in two different shots to futher enhance the mood I was trying to make. Thank you!
:D
Still a long way to go, but feels good to have an idea of where I'm going.
Have decided to deffinately go with my proposed story 'twist' at the end - but don't feel like revealing it until the story flows a bit better.
Title Ideas:
* Voodoo Cupid.
* Smoke and Mirrors
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